Mona looks distracted while giving a blowjob. Turns out something happened earlier that day.

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i dont understand why this has such a low rating? its pretty good art and characters that people like. someone please explain

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I'm trying to understand as well, my friend =/

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@KirizakiArt @SpazAliciouis It's probably the lack of pages. I've seen people get upset when someone starts uploading a comic that only has 5 pages out, so one with 3 was always going to get some negative attention. Personally don't think it's that big of an issue if it's the artist uploading it themselves, as they can get early feedback that way.

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Shit art and Kaeya is a piece of shit.

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@SpazAlicious @KirizakiArt
My guess is :
Probably because of bamboozled from searcing [yuri] tag, and saw the cover... And suddenly theres hetero inside
Not gonna lie, I also sometimes hated it if i got baited.. But other people probably went to extreme to rate it low

(For me its not strictly to Yuri, once i got bamboozled from yaoi femboy too, but the inside not at all..... and if im in the mood of Vanilla, suddenly NTR after 9 chapter lol...
but i usually just close it and move on, not low rating it)

But yeah, dont let it makes you down, keep drawing

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@Suzaku+Renzan

Nah, I'm cool. I didn't consider the bait thing, tbh, but it's not. The cover is like this and I added the tag bc there IS such scene. Well, guess I will get some hate until it's it happens xD

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I didn't see a yuri tag, guess it was removed...I've seen TONS of doujins in Japan that put yuri art on the cover and there's ZERO yuri content in the whole thing, seems like false advertising to me but whatev. you never know what the contents will be, I guess.

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I had it removed temporarily, to avoid confusion bc the scene was a little far from happening, but I put it back now. I figured it's obviously just better to add 'ffm threesome' as well, better this way so people don't feel baited. It's kinda my fault for not adding that earlier.

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Benny Boy! Not like this!

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Are you going to upload the rest of the pages for this comic?

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@Ikaros156 Yeah, It's finished on my paid platforms already, I'm uploading a new one for free every Sunday until it completes.

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