https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/6156264

is this... translated by the author itself???? what's with the white text box though gahd damn, man could've gone without the text box

Base +6, damanmen -6, hakuryu2250 -19, TheUnknownable1234 -9

Sorry m8, its ma first time and i didn't know how to edit better

Base +2, jplshejeser +24, asd9d +6, hakuryu2250 +19, TheUnknownable1234 +9, Orotsumei +6

idk why you removed your previous note about using mtl

002
OG: ん…おいで♡
TL: "Hm...come here♡"
ED: she's not saying "Hm"

003
OG: これが先生の…ビクビクしてて以外と可愛い…かも？
TL: "(This trembling and nervousness from the teacher...is unexpectedly cute...maybe?"
ED: she never finishes her initial thought and you ended trying to combine everything into one sentence, so she isn't saying the trembling and nervousness is cute

008
OG: （確かめるために適当に街の男を釣られたけど…やっぱり全然違う…）
TL: "(Just to confirm, I intentionally got caught by a random guy from the town, but... as I suspected, it's totally different after all...)"
ED: she didn't get caught

009
OG: （亀頭が入っていく…これからこの逞しいペニ…おちんぽに犯されちゃうんだ…）
TL: "The glans is going in...From now on, I'm going to be violated by this strong peni...dick)"
ED: she's not calling it strong

011
OG: （亀頭が挿入れただけで頭が一瞬真っ白になっちゃうなんて…♡）
TL: (Just from inserting the glans, my mind goes completely white for a moment...♡)
ED: you fixed the turtle head phrase but messed up the part that was fine before

OG: 馴染ませてからー
TL: "After I get used to it -"
ED: this is part of her plea, not a broken phrase about what'll happen "after"

012
OG: んんっ♡
TL: N/A

014
OG:（本物の射精…♡長っ…♡お腹パンパンになっちゃうッ）
TL: "(Real ejactulation...♡ It's going deeper...♡ My stomach feel so full...♡"
ED: on top of the original mistakes in your prev attempt, you're just guessing what the other parts of the line mean now

015
OG: あんなに射精したのにまだ元気だなんて…
TL: "Even though You ejaculate so much, you[sic] still full of energy..."
ED: she's specifically talking about what just happened (tenses)

016
OG: 欲しがっちゃうんじゃない…♡
TL: "you can't help it but wanting to do it again, aren't you...♡"
ED: this makes no sense

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008 "the teacher size"
008 "can't help but expecting it"
013 "be made aware of it by stranger"
014 "stomach feel so full"
014 "It feel so good"
014 "filled with full of pleasure"
016 "you still full"
016 "If He's not using condom"
016 "you can't help it but wanting to do it again, aren't you...♡"

Base +33, hakuryu2250 +19, TheUnknownable1234 +9, goya_dechi +6, Zeowing +7

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Base +2

This artist deserves soooo much more love

Base +6