[Coya (Rati)] CATTLEYA -202 Goushitsu no Robo Musume- [Digital] [English] (DCWCore & Crabble)

Goushitsu no Robussy

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人不能，至少不应该

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003
OG: 今日も正確な時間のゴミ出し…ロボット顔負けね♥
TL: "You're bringing out the trash at the exact time today as well! Almost like a robot ♥"
ED: she's not saying he's almost like a robot, she's saying he's putting robots to shame

OG: 彼女と会って挨拶するのが金曜の密かな愉しみだ
TL: "Meeting her on fridays is always a secret pleasure to me"
ED: specifically exchanging greetings too

005
OG: お伺いしたいことがあって
TL: "...I found something"
ED: he wants to ask her about something

OG: カトレアさんのかなって
TL: "Doesn't this belong to you?"
ED: he's not asking her directly but he's explaining his thought process

009
OG: カトレアさんっもう…っ
TL: "Please more Cattleya..."
ED: he's not asking for more

010
OG: そんなに力まないで
TL: "I'll be gentle"
ED: she's giving him a command, not describing how she'll be

011
OG: もう人間相手では満足できない身体にしてあげるっ♥
TL: "I've never had a human partner this good! ♥"
ED: she's describing her plans for him, not her own experience

015
OG: あッはいってるわッ貴方のが / ずっぽりとっ！！
TL: "You're in" / "Ah!" / "Ah!" / "Fuck me!"
ED: she's not telling him to do anything, she's just describing what's happening

OG: 私の人工膣にもう慣れてきてる
TL: "...in my experienced artificial pussy"
ED: this line isn't a continuation of the prev (mistranslated) line, so it's mistranslated as well. she's speculating about his tolerance for artificial pussy now

016
OG: 壊すくらいの勢いで来てっ
TL: "Give me everything you got"
ED: she mentions being taken with enough force to break her

017
OG: いッ… / イッちゃ…ぅ！！
TL: "It's..." / "it's too much!!"
ED: she's cumming

018
OG: イかされちゃったわね♥
TL: "Before we continue...♥"
ED: she's talking about how he made her cum

OG: 自分だけ休むなんて許しませんよッ
TL: "It's not fair if only one of us gets a rest!"
ED: he's just not allowing her to rest

etc

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人可以，至少要试试
卧槽！新概念xp

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https://e-hentai.org/g/1309633/5e27df0bb3/ raw/original
https://e-hentai.org/g/1330071/ae595b0256/ alt English
https://e-hentai.org/g/1957569/30eeffb386/ Spanish
https://e-hentai.org/g/2547464/8727a06b0d/ alt raw/original
https://e-hentai.org/g/2551044/39c78e799b/ Chinese

thanks for the effort

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page 20: the man has a dream!

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It might be my conformist ass but why even bother pointing out the errors of an obviously mistranslated doujin, it's either this or japanese and I'm not learning Japanese just to beat my meat... So why even bother if yall are not even gonna translate the whole thing?

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it's required for the rough translation tag

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Just so people know, i used the translated scanned version of this doujin, i did change a couple things that made more sense to me and context.

I saw a digital copy and wanted a better translated version, so i did it myself, not perfect, but at least you don't have to learn Japanese haha.

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