This is my first go at translating one of these. It's probably a little rough, especially the handwritten sound effects. Enjoy!

Japan wtf have you wrote again?

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You used the wrong 1280x version of the images. Download the archive or the non-downsized torrent (right side). Also not gonna comment on the editing, but you could clean out the stuff instead of slapping text over it.

A lot (if not most, to be completely honest) of your translation is made up and/or inaccurate. Yet another "gift" from someone who doesn't know Japanese and just plugs everything into DeepL.

Page 24
Your TL: C'mon
JP: らえ
Intent: Nope. It's supposed to be a broken-up だめ, meaning no/stop.

Page 24
Your TL: Casapi
JP: ちょくちょくお
Intent: Uh, what? lol Basically referring to 直腸. See next line.

Page 24
Your TL: I'll cum
JP: 直腸
Intent: She's talking about her asshole.

Page 24
Your TL: I'm gonna cum
JP:らめぇえ
Intent: More made-up dialogue. Means stop/don't/nooo

Page 24
Your TL: Cumming x3
JP: なくなるりせいなくなちゃう
Intent: She's saying she's gonna go crazy/she's driving her crazy

Page 13
Your TL: Your tasty white stuff // is dangerous! // Casapi's cum has gotta be the most powerful aphrodisiac
JP: ヤバい // この味・・・この匂い・・・// ホントにカサピーの媚薬ザーメンだなぁ
Intent: This is weird because the main ideas are there but the end result is really different from the actual meaning. She's not saying the cum is dangerous nor that it tastes good. She's saying the way it smells/tastes might as well make it an aphrodisiac.

Page 13
Your TL: Whaddaya say, Casapi? // How about we get really lewd? // And you stick it in here...
JP: どうしたのカサピー // ソコ欲しいの？ // もぉ・・・本当にエッチだなぁ
Intent: Here's what she's really saying: "What's wrong, Casapi? // You want me to fuck your pussy? // Jeez... You're such a dirty girl..." The tone is teasing and also the third part is missing.

Page 14
Your TL: Are you sure... it's okay?
JP: うわ・・・何それ
Intent: Missing?

Page 14
Your TL: My heart's racing just thinking about it
JP: あんなぶっといのがボクのナカに・・・
Intent: It COULD work if you maintain the idea she's more excited/anxious about the FUCKING BIG THING part than just the BIG part. "It's even bigger than before... // Just imagining that fat cock going inside... makes my heart race." Personally I'd say it refers more to concern. "If you stuck something this fat inside me/my [little] pussy, you'd..."

Page 15
Your TL: It's too intense // this sensation is too intense
JP: きもちがっ // 先走り過ぎて
Intent: More made up lines. Hint: 先走り means precum.

Last edited on 15 June 2023, 17:14.

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I understand the wish to see what you like translated but this shit is just...
Why no translate only for yourself!?
Its really disappointing to see here a dj translated and then see its just made up shit
People like you should be baned

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so, does it qualify for a rewrite tag?

edit: oh, someone gave it a "rough translation" tag. nvm then

Last edited on 16 June 2023, 17:11.

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Keep your rewrite for yourself, dumb bitch, now no one is going to translate it.

Fuck you.

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Setting the 'translation' issues aside, what the actual fuck is going on with those titties on the cover? Her right one looks like it's somehow... dislocated?

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the left one is on the back, the right one is lower on the back.. what's difficult about it?

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heh, this is cool

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>Get all excited because Ash Yokoshima
>It's MTL

Why won't tenboro do something? This site is supposed to be the nexus of quality, but lately it's a nexus of MTL, shitty downscales, watermarks and DMCA expunges. What the fuck happened?

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Because the powers that be feel translations are still translations, regardless of how shitty they might be. That's why nothing's being done...

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I didn't know cum bath was a tag

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delete this, this translation is garbage.

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I'm fine before page 18 until I saw she came with her mouth ...

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