WTF is with this grammar and tragic edit?

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When your translation needs a translation LOL

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IIRC PD does his own 'translations,' hence *gestures vaguely* this.

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Someone should tell him that the "translation" is so off that it's a waste of time and he should let the "pros" do it.

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Chinese: https://e-hentai.org/g/2577609/f2332f8510/

Chinese (Part 1): https://e-hentai.org/g/826530/5ed5a9eddd/

Artist's Pixiv: http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=51033497

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Thanks for the attempt but the translation is really bad and the font sometimes is unreadable unless you zoom a lot.

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This look like MTL. AI translate...no proofreader at all

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Gosh, this reminds me of the Duwang translation. Get A Feeling So Complicated.

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