Happy father's day everyone, first time doing this kind of thing. Very time consuming, took me several weeks.
RAW:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2546661/425131d5b5/

reminder that THREE of Amazon's Yuuka game are translated, hit up f95zone and search with Nacchuushou/Natyusyo. (he also making a Natsuki game rn)
I love how Amazon just casually cranks up his already gigantic tiddies to even more giant tits and he incorporated bite marks a lot lately which is very nice.
preggo with a lewd wedding dress is the best. (Tsuzura Kuzukago also does it on AV Joyuu no Kaa-san)

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Very clean for a "first time doing this kind of thing."

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@suratkabar
Yeah the Todoroki one is pretty good, that one took me around 2 months to translate. I released the english translation on f95 like a year ago.

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BabyFactory Yuuka is definitely my favorite.

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love how the title being honest about it

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tonight we feast

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Finally a good English translation for this doujin. Thanks so much for this.

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Props for bothering to redraw, but did you accidentally change the levels while editing? Your version is significantly lighter than the raw.

Some stuff I noticed:
1. You're missing periods in a lot of bubbles, they should almost always end with punctuation.
2. Your text shaping could be a lot better too, a lot of bubbles have text touching the edges, which looks really bad. Try messing about with spacing, and you can always hypenate (within reason) if you need to.
3. I get that it's hard to fit moans and the like into the text boxes if you're not hand-lettering, but try having the letters on individual layers and messing around with the angle and position instead of just using the vertical text tool. Straight up vertical English text never looks good.

Decent job for a first time though! Person didn't want to do the script for this so I thought it was gonna sit here with that disgusting ddolls TL forever, lol.

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Figured I'd let ya know that Kinsei Translations was commissioned to work on this. Our Jedi editor is currently editing it and it should be out soon(TM).

I would also suggest making corrections on your hyphenation placements. It should never be on the left of any sentence/paragraphs.
Also what hamuxhamuxhamu said about the levels being changed are correct. It's generally a good rule of thumb to never adjust stuff like that with digital releases. I suggest hitting up https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/ if you want to learn more or even the EHCove discord server.

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Nacchuushou the goat

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I wish I could read the text on her body near the end. And despite being in some sort of relationship with her kouhai, she still sleeps with the boss. Kinda off putting, but if bro's happy with it...

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This is like ADHD in Hentai form.

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