It was suppose to be a illustration only, but ended up doing a tiny sequence, if you can rate and comment for feedback i would appreciate.

some feedback? Ok, well, this is supposed to be NTR, maybe a introductory line like "I came early from work, to found out my wife semi naked with a man I never seen before" could work on the first page, also, as the more the NTR guy is having sex with the wife, you need to add some effects, like steam, sweat and blushing from her and him too. And maybe a final line like "I really love my wife..."

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