MTL

text too small

Base +6, noname31 +6, DeltaX +11, borkenbea +12, jason12052011 +7, Uaaasia +8

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/697159/cd5ef6e690/

The original is pretty verbose as well, which is a nice way of saying it's exposition-heavy and badly written.

But the point is that I don't think the text in this translation could be made any larger without cutting a lot of the original.

Base +7, Manonymous Rex +6, F_Kessler -6

@uploader

just gonna copy and paste my advice below.

List of things you need to learn to be better, I am no editor but just giving you some general advice

1. Use suitable font, wild words is usually acceptable.
2. Make sure to have someone to proofread your/someone translation , by hiring or some other way.
3. Make sure to use proper size and word alignment when placing the text in the dialogue bubble.
4. You can ask for someone advice in the forum on Cove of Scanlator.
5. If able, for courtesy sake, link the raw and official store page, for people who want to genuinely support the artist.

follow these and you re golden.

Additional notes: Ignoring the MTL i prefer the font is BIG and READABLE, also you could ve just use the textless version when editing your 'Translation'

Base +6, dt1248 +6, cl321 +6, jason12052011 +7, as102 +13, DeltaX +11, BabyThor +1, ast4 +6, anonft +6, supperdude +6