My first translation project. I'm not fluent in Japanese but I did my best with what knowledge I have of the language. Part 2 and 3 will be forthcoming.

You poorly upscaled this. It's really blurry.

On your translation, I just checked a couple pages, but some of your lines are wrong.

Page 5
Your TL: I'll just pretend to be sleeping.
JP: 厄介ごとはごめんだ寝たふりしよう
Intent: Best to avoid any trouble and pretend I'm asleep.

Page 7
Your TL: I guess I can do that
JP: そんなことできるわけ
Intent: This means the exact opposite of what you wrote lol "There's no way I can do that."

Page 8
Your TL: You're bigger than average
JP: お兄さんの大きい
Intent: Idk where the "average" comes from. "You're so big [onii-san]."

And more.

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Thanks. I like this artist and hope to see more of his works translated

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