hey guys, this was my first translation, I don’t speak Japanese so I tried my best to do something correct with google translation., there are some sentences that I couldn’t find a good translation so I changed a little to according the context, I hope that it doesn’t change to much from the original one.
At the beginning I just wanted to translate for myself but why not sharing for you guys too, so don’t be so hard on your reviews haha.
I hope you guys liked it.

Sorry guys for if you didn’t like it because of the translation or it wasn’t clean. It was my first time doing that and I didn’t planned to share this, it just for myself but given that there wasn’t any translation about this I decided to post this waiting for someone who have a better trnaslation. Thank you guys for your honest review!
I will be grateful if someone decide to finally translate this doujinshi. If someone to that I will put the link to the better translation.

>doesn't speak Japanese
>just prays machine translation, which is famously shit, does its job correctly (spoiler: it didn't)
>wrong downsized resolution
>absolutely meme-tier editing

I can't even give you proper feedback because you technically didn't do anything. Auto-translate, auto "cleaning", auto typesetting. Was a human involved in any of this besides uploading?

Here's real advice: go learn Japanese.

You're so lucky I already had this on my translation to-do list.

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We really need "MTL" or "Bad Translation" tag... At least "AI translation"
This is just painful for both eyes and brain.

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Other Language or Version
Japanese digital
Japanese
Chinese translated by 不咕鸟汉化组
Korean digital
English digital, You are here!

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Bruh, I saw the thumbnail and got happy, then a 0.1sec later I saw the rating and got sad knowing it was a garbage translation...goddamnit.

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Not gonna lie even if you don't speak japanese you could have gone in and edited the dialogue to not be as awkward.

You say Shiranui is your favorite and yet you dishonor her like this? For shame.

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one man trash is another man treasure

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I believe the best solution to this is to link the better translation in the whenever shit like this pops up

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Fuck sake, I was so hyped in seeing this translated and got machine translation instead?

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Dude Fucking post it some where else

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Damn Yukikaze, for a 10 month pregnancy she came underdeveloped...

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Never "translate" anything ever again. This is painfully stupid and bad. You put zero effort into every aspect of it. Did you do this on a fucking tablet or something? No, because a tablet even has software that allows better typesetting and editing than what you did here. It's like you deliberately put the absolute bare-minimum effort into every step of the process. If you aren't going to learn Japanese, the least you can do is learn typesetting and editing. You also could have learned how to clean up the garbage MTL. You know it's ok to take a crappy machine translation that more or less gets the point across, and change the wording to make it sound natural and make sense in English, right? It would still be garbage but you wouldn't get dogpiled as badly. Nobody is stopping you from making a sincere effort. Copy-pasting the MTL output with a bad font into square white boxes is a joke, and what you've uploaded here is a joke. It's like you used MS Paint.

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At least you tried to translate this, but please dont "try" again (im serious)

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LMAO THE DIPSHIT GOT REKTED SO HARD THAT HE DISOWNED HIS POST LMAO! GO DIE PLS
YOU WON'T ESCAPE US. THE DIPSHIT TRANSLATOT IS Deetr

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That censorship is so awful, its the only thing who truly bothers me.

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