I'm in awe of how many times you were able to misspell "translator" or any words related to translating.

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Ah, how embarrassing, if it wasn't for you I wouldn't have noticed... it seems that I can't even trust my eyes

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@Kyuume - also, like, everything else holy shit.

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Grammatical errors are pretty common with Anything > English translations, so I'd honestly not bother unless you were dead-set serious on becoming native-level fluent in English.
It's also worth mentioning that a lot of context was probably lost due to it being translated two times over. And lastly is how awful the font looks without any re-drawing.

If you want to do translations, maybe start off with outsourcing to a team that knows what they're doing first? An editor/proofreader can go a longer way than A.I. can.

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Umm, I don’t mean to be rude but you’re not quite ready to do English translation yet, perhaps have someone with a deeper knowledge of the language proofread before you publish next time. If you going to do this again I mean. Keep it up with improving your English skills and I’m sure you’ll improve.

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Thanks but no thanks, reading the comments I think this is my first and last work in English language, sorry if my English level made your eyes bleed

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It's not the greatest, but it's legible and readable. Better than a lot of first attempts I have seen.
Really, if you just had a native English speaker go over the text to check phrasing, you would do fine.
From my experience, having a final check by a native of the language for any translation is usually a helpful precaution.

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BlueFire gave some good advice. Just have someone proofread. It goes both ways, English translators have problems translating Japanese, too. You should reach out to others that share that passion, it can only improve your experience.

If you just want someone to proofread and go back and forth on translating the meaning, my discord is: catboyguy

And take everything others throw at you on the internet lightly.

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Yo no se ingles pero tus traducciones al español que haces son muy buenos , se nota el esfuerzo que le pusiste y se agradece , para la proxima puedas pedir ayuda a alguien que hable ingles y ambos puedan hacer una traduccion excelente siempre es mejor con uno habla el idioma los traductores como depp o google jamas son exactos .

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Leonhart99 it’s ok no one masters A language instantly it takes some practice and that’s fine just try it again later don’t let those people stop you. I can tell you put in the effort and time to try to translate and that’s what matters.

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Thanks for the words of motivation, maybe I'll reconsider it, although I'm going to need someone who has domain of the English language

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Keep translating. You can only improve through doing it. Better it being done half-well than not at all. I enjoyed it. If you ever do go back to this one, don't forget to re-upload pls!

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I’ve just uploaded the second part of this story. I wouldn’t mind if you translated it again. If u are worried about the grammar, u can just dm me, or go to an online website for grammar fix

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