I've said it before, and I'll say it again: this is trash. If you can't tell a decent comic story - of any genre - in 50 pages, then you need to transition to writing books.

Because even setting aside the fact that this is a nearly sexless *fetish comic,* it remains a directionless, plodding, plotless nightmare. I mean, FFS, why is the heroine such an unlikable and on-the-nose self-insert?

Imagine all the 20-25 page satisfying porn comics this guy could have churned out over the last two years. Then look at this monstrosity. SMH.

Base +6, ChrisDon +7, chicobola14 -4, sidefor -6, ciln +6, truler -6, 11zwieber -6, UnknoWable +6, KnightDelSol -6, someguyw6j +6, vengefulwill -6, Solzuke +6, Hatsworth -6, and 27 more...

this is by far one of the worst things i've ever read. didn't even get a half-chub. flaccid through and through. in fact, i think my penis actually got smaller while reading this. can't even read it for the plot because its so dogshit. but not the funny dogshit where it's ironically bad, it's just unreadable.

Base +5, sidefor -6, truler -6, 11zwieber -6, ragingcube -8, chicobola14 -4, UnknoWable +6, Reson -6, KnightDelSol -6, TheGrimHeaper +6, vengefulwill -6, sadyutta +6, anomahous +12, and 21 more...

Re: p. 287 - you know, once upon a time, we could rely on a pointless fight like this breaking down into *at least* some frenching. But now, you know that isn't what's going to happen. This content has become angst-driven drama with a little smear of smut. Like, what even IS this anymore? Who is it intended for? I feel like I'm reading dirty Babysitters Club.

Base +6, anomahous +12, colddish +7, hmmwhat -1, mjcrest +6, kiale -7, wowfapper -7, DSCDVTYD +11, FFFFFACK +12, TheBossSean +6, JoeWill1980 +6, Joklet +6, copperheart +8, and 3 more...

I dont understand the hate from you two.

It's kinda fun to read and not everything has to be super smutty. The artist probably enjoys drawing it for themselves and thats good too. It's not like you are paying for reading it.

Base +6, mjcrest -6, kiale +7, anomahous -12, jackel98 +6, wowfapper +7, Darnock +6, asdasdasd22 +6, Pyoncake -6

I've written at length in other iterations of this gallery as to why I think Kip's soul is black and his work is garbage, Bookrat. But, to keep it brief: the dude built his reputation on smut that was tight and to the point, but cashed in on the losers who fund trash like this by teasing out every speck of dialogue, every scene, and every plot element to an insane degree. He's not telling a story - he's farming a field of patreon simps.

I'm not inherently opposed to story-driven pornography, either. In fact, I rather enjoy it. But this is neither porn nor, really, a story anymore. It's just kind of a rolling mass of disparate ideas and loose ends, glazed in a sheen of fanservice. In a nutshell: Kip's work is getting to the point where I'm starting to doubt it belongs on this site (I'm not going to petition for its removal or anything. But ask yourself: is this hentai? No. Is it really pornographic? We'd had ONE nipple flash in 300 pages. So no on that account, too).

Base +6, wowfapper -7, vengefulwill -6, Idealizer +6, anomahous +12, ChrisDon +7, DSCDVTYD +11, plexorz +10, Teebles +6, somethingperson -6, deathma +6, Darnock -6, Eruntalon +7, and 15 more...

@battleshipGascogne

Lack of taste is a covid symptom, get tested

Base +6, Idealizer -6, JoeWill1980 -6, hmmwhat +1, FFFFFACK -12, anontw9786 -5, Joklet -6, copperheart +8, Datbomb -7, JayMack98 +7, MyOpinionIsRight -6, NapalmFlame -6, Flan-chan -16

@BattleshipGascogne This comic sucks, for sure, but are you high effort trolling or something? Give it a rest dog, this isnt gonna get any better

Base +6, foxclaw -8, Datbomb -7, JayMack98 +7, no248 -6

@ScaleFap

I agree, you should be tested. Kip is utter dogshit. people compare this to ayano's diary but that's not fair at all. ayano's diary is actually good. theres progression happening and the story feels authentic, and gives you SOMETHING to work with even if it's very light. it's a fun read regardless if you consider it hentai or not. kip's crap is just that. crap. it doesn't fit in any other criteria other than crap.

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12, benmurphyx -6

The comic is just a never-ending tease without even minor payoffs. If you actually read it, it's spun off in like 15 different directions at this point without ever tying up loose ends or closing arcs.

I write books for a living - narrative's aren't my beef. But there actually has to *BE* a fucking narrative. This comic is schizophrenic - it doesn't know what it is, what it wants, what it's shooting for. The main character is soulless, small and mean; the supporting cast is either stupid or helpless (or evil), and despite lots of things happening, nothing even remotely meaningful ever occurs.

And, of course, THAT'S IGNORING THE FACT THAT IT'S ONLY THIS LONG BECAUSE HE'S FARMING THESE PATREON SIMPS FOR ALL THEY'RE WORTH. Real artists - even smut artists - prioritize creation over cashflow. They want to make a thing first, and also get paid. Kip creates JUST for income, and it's reflected in his work.

Last edited on 15 July 2023, 22:12.

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12, Dr. Forest +6, benmurphyx -6, BobDringus +6, no248 +6

honestly. there are so many great artists that would be happy to have even a tenth of what kip has AND deserve it with interest, but unfortunately don't receive it because these retards are giving all their money to ass clowns like kip

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12, benmurphyx -6

@BattleshipGascogne @Skittles666

I know you're gonna flame me for showing descent, so I'm just gonna say it plainly; blacklist Kip's tag already.
It's honestly becoming concerning at this point the amount of times you come back to the same artist - the same comic, no less - to spew the same vitriol in the same manner.

Y'all need to treat yourselves to something you actually LIKE, instead of endlessly shit-flinging towards someone who won't ever hear it.

If you know better artists, go to them. Give them the money you think they deserve.

Stop wasting time and energy flaming this asshole. You know he's not gonna change, so why even bother?

Base +4, no248 -6

When this "comic" starts to go somewhere, I'll be in a nursing home.

Base +1, FFFFFACK +12, anomahous +12

@LurelightDevil

Why? Because it's there.

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12, benmurphyx -6

@BattleshipGascogne

Then do yourself a favor and block it out so that it WON'T be there.
For your own sanity's sake.

You rile yourself up about this one dickhead so often I'm half-tempted to call it a hate-boner.
Which is ironic considering how you prattle on about Kip's work not turning you on!

Base +4, no248 -6

@LurelightDevil ¯|_(ツ)_/¯

Seriously, mate - they're just words. Yeah, the guy is an ass, but do you *really* think I'm investing a lot of time or thought into this? It takes me maybe - maybe - 3 mins to type a post like those above.

I think you're round-aboutly carrying water for Kip, but are too embarrassed to do it directly. Nobody is saying you can't like the thing.

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12

@BattleshipGascogne

I literally do not even care for this comic or Kip, I'm just tired of seeing your dumb ass whining about it every time these comics are updated.

If that's how you wanna waste your time, then be my guest.

I just question why you'd rather do that instead of... looking at stuff you can actually jack off to.

Sounds pretty miserable to me lol

Base +4, FFFFFACK -12, Joklet -6, BobDringus -6

@LurelightDevil ok fair, but idk its just fun to shit on kip. good way to blow off steam i guess.
even though kip's work is utter dog shit, theres only two other reoccurring galleries i would consider worse
banana cream cake is one of them, but that fuCKING weight gain game advertisement that one dickhead keeps posting is even worse than that.

at the end of the day, kip is a good punching bag. nothing more, nothing less.

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12, Joklet +6

OP you're missing page a page between 253 and 254, the other gallery has it.

Also IDK what y'all are making a fuss over. Sure, the porn is minimal, but what little is there I like a lot. The bigger issue is definitely stringing people along to get more money out of them, but it's not like this practice wasn't done all over TV for decades. Let idiots spend their money how they want. I like it enough to read it for free; it's a perfect level of trashy, plus I like Tessa as a character. At the end of the day, the people you're upset about won't read these comments, so stop wasting your energy here.

Base +6

@Ms Marvel -Carol- Has there even been anything that would qualify as porn in this comic? I mean, I guess we saw Tessa's tits like 100 pages ago. Was there something else I missed?

Base +6, FFFFFACK +12

@BattleshipGascogne Fair point; it doesn't do a great job of being porn. Though I will say the sushi stuffing scene lives rent free in my head. Either way, this is definitely a story first porn second comic, which isn't a problem in and of itself.

Base +6