As always, any feedback is appreciated! I just hope that I can improve even more, I might or might not try doing new stuff in my next work. But, since I have college soon enough, I hope I'll have enough time to work on it. Oh, by the way, I also have someone who's willing to proofread this work (thanks Alex).

And last but not least, I also set up a ko-fi in case any of you wants to give me a tip, eheheh..
I would greatly appreciate anything as it might help me motivate to work on these kinds of stuff even more :D

My Ko-fi link: https://ko-fi.com/itsadonism

Probably not helping much with just this, but you really nailed the 'almost human' thing here!
Thanks for showing such a good work!

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@elimiere thankss, i'm glad you said that ahahahah xD it was kind of my aim for her personality

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I like your visual style, it doesn't look like just "screenshots of a 3D game" like a lot of other people's look like. There's something fresh and nice to look at here. The poses don't look stiff either, but almost like they were stills from a moving sequence (i.e., you get the movement feel right, even if they were obviously just posed that way).

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@Stem Cell Thanks for the feedback :D Yes I've been trying to find the best way to make them look a bit more natural. Of course, no matter what i do it's still obvious that they're 3d XD. So i try to focus more on the layout of the panels and bubbles, which i hope is not too confusing to read and follow ⊙⁠﹏⁠⊙

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Very good to read and follow! Not straight to sex and has some meat so the part when they have the sex is much more appreciated. Awesome work!

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@Jay Low Thanks for your feedback ^^ Best part are saved for the last no? eheheh

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nice job. I remember that I had a thing for this kind of entity in my teenage years. Girls who are not born, somehow appeared into this world. It is so strange that I also fantasized about one who could get in an out of computer screens. Keep this going, maybe this will rekindle some joys of the past for me. My mind changed too much over the time. The only difference is that I like to be the one in control. In any case, if you want I can help you turn the 3d look to 2d manga look, with the help of some probabilistic tools.

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