https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ01041963.html/?translation=RJ01041964
ENG version from DLsite.

That ending was lame. He couldn't even win her over without some magical mind fusion fluid. Went from slow corruption to instant loss 2-koma...

Base +7, BLT123 +13, Heinz_Brausewind +6

@ jonnydept
yea it was pretty lame with the SUDDENLY instant win potion. Could have use it at the start secretly to trick her tbh

Base +5, Shurikensei +10, BLT123 +13, A.Kasuga +6

'if I attack right now my people would be in danger'

no he's already declared war. take his head.

Base +7, sleepergnome +6, Shurikensei +10

03: beings the lived => (not a conjunction) / beings that lived / beings who lived
03: thieir => their
03: theyoung => the young
03: neighbouting => neighboring
03: startrd => started
03: prosparity => prosperity
04: drak => dark
04: (cleaning needed)
04: out ally => (not a possessive) / our ally
05: Citizen => (incoherent: plural needed) / Citizens
08: make any human that wears it obey my commands => (applicable to dark elves?) / make any person who wears it obey my commands
23: assult => assault
29: Lets have => Let's have

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@orasmase
Yeah it's not looking good... DSMH has a total of 9 projects under their belt according to their DLsite profile.
From the samples of their TL of SHIS's work and this they make typos and mistakes that fluent English speakers usually don't make.
In fact, if you search them up you find that they're a Sri Lankan group.
All the other samples are mostly fine for the English, but I can't speak for how their quality is in completion.
The silver lining is that DSMH has volunteered to translate all projects they've work on so far, so all proceeds go to the authors. Make of that what you will.
If you want to take your chances you could contact them.
Otherwise, chances of this being updated for corrections are slim as it might be subject to an approval process and it's already been released for several months.

Regardless, thanks for pointing these out. Hopefully, someone else will give it a good read to catch more mistakes and fix it up.

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