Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2023797/a883d053a2/

https://www.pixiv.net/users/42644779
https://www.dlsite.com/maniax/work/=/product_id/RJ345348.html
https://www.dmm.co.jp/dc/doujin/-/detail/=/cid=d_212664

thanks for your political commentary at the end

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please do more Okottei

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Elon not liking gyaru is a very serious political issue and my message needs to be heard around the world

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@pochipinku how dare you not putting the X logo in your last page! Elon sacrified so much to make this very important change! You should be ashamed of yourself!

(obviously it's sarcasm, but there's so many crazy people, if i don't say it people will believe i'm truly thinking this, lol)

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WAIT A MINUTE.

THIS IS JUST MARRIAGE.

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Editing pet peeves:

1. Please punctuate. Periods and whatnot aren't optional in English, despite a weird pervasive myth in the scanlation community that they're not needed.
2. Hyphenation happens before, not after:

Gyaru-
chan

and not

Gyaru
-chan

Pretty good for the rest though. Clearly you did your homework :^)

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And here we have another example of the reprehensible cutegyaru viciously attacking another budding scanlator to try and secure the sweet sweet commission money all to themselves. When will they be stopped?!

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I guess this is how fat bastards in NTR manga are made.

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Page 11 dropped an "I". Also, the text in the text bubble on the credits page extends past the page.

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