>Just as Keikaku

What a lewd calculator

Base +6, nemo_adams +10, Mistermd +6, TechnoTeddy +6, TheGrayKnight +6, kamisking +6, Phantombet3 +6, nukemissle +15, mikey57 +15, 5pect1er +6, DesRed +6, swordpaladin +9, minnazzo +16

No more "gomen Yuuka", only kanpeki~

Base +6, TechnoTeddy +6, TheGrayKnight +6, kamisking +6, Phantombet3 +6, nukemissle +15, 5pect1er +6, DesRed +6, minnazzo +16

P2: "Did you see my run earlier?" - Using a possessive determiner for a verb, not a noun. "Were you watching me run?"
P2: "Suddenly fell down like that,,," (急にしゃがみ込んで) - Missing the object pronoun "you". Not going to mention that "fall over" isn't しゃがみ込んで, the paraphrasing is fine.
P2: "Get a heastroke" - Heatstroke is a condition, not a countable object.
P3: "Giving out such a feminine smell... and makes me lightheaded like this!" - Giving off such a feminine smell... and MAKING me feel lightheaded!"
P6: "I want to fill Yuuka's to the brim!" - I want to fill Yuuka is? I want to fill Yuuka has? Apostrophe 's is wholly unecessary.
P7: "I really got it - Sensei's baby" 先生との赤ちゃん絶対デきた(出来た) - Translation aside, the wording here just is plain bad, and the struccture of reading left to right, top to bottom flips the sentence order around, which would be like reading it as 絶対デきた(出来た)先生との赤ちゃん.
P8: "Cummed this much inside of me". - Again, you're missing the object pronoun for "you", AND using "cummed" instead of "came".

TL's fine, PRing needs work.

Base +7, zxczxcasdasd +10, orasmase +8, gilpo +6, FireclawGod -6, tempopopo -6, Blablabladditybla +6, minnazzo +16