笑了，连中文都没有擦干净

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01: witch known [...] but => (generalization needs plural + verb missing) / Witches are known [...] but
01: in the front of people => (idiom) / in front of people
01: Concentrate => (new clause) / concentrating / and concentrate
01: witch's calculate => (can't have a verb after a verb or possessive, also title) / The witch's calculation
01: translator by => (a way to say you didn't actually translate yourself?) / translation by
01: also such a witch => (verb missing) / is also such a witch
03: it is the first time to challenge the casting of => (nonsense) / this is the first try casting a spell for creating
03: Although [...] but => (one conjunction too many)
03: Amarine, who is a great witch => the great witch Amarine
04: three or two strokes => (idiom) / two or three strokes
04: Although => Though
04/08: dare not be => (nonsense)
05: Clothes => (full sentence needed)
05: try it, let me think about it => (nonsense)
06: present the master's wishes => (nonsense)
07: fengwei => (not English)
07: my brain => (wrong subject?) / his brain
07: paint => (nonsense)
07: I'll tell you => (incoherent tense) / I tell you
08: This point => (idiom) / At this point
08: dispose of => (object missing) / dispose of me
08: Just rely on you => (nonsense)
09: this secretion Make => (third person) / This secretion makes
09: my senses more sensitive => (redundant)
09: getting orgasmed => (nonsense) / Being brought to orgasm
And so on... Also, heavy lack of punctuation and misuse of capitalization.

My advice: stop using machine translation.

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Cute bra, reasonably insane story, legitimate excuse for pregnancy, and an poorly done translation.

Just another week on e-hentai, folks!

Last edited on 14 August 2023, 16:44.

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tagging based on @orasmase

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RAW

https://e-hentai.org/s/97f83cded8/2261613-57

just go a see the original....

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piece of shit manual translation, just fucking post it somewhere else!!!!

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