The dialogue in this is pretty good for a 3d comic. Although I might just be jaded from those crappy gender bender 3d comics (can't remember who does those). I was actually getting into the story when it cut out. I hope this is continued.

By the way, I think there are some pictures missing, the story jumps ahead at points, and there are a few duplicate pictures littered around.

Base +6

very very nice

Base +1