9 parts in total, will be publishing them in some time !!

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OK bro! Good job, let's wait for the rest.

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Feedback:

1. Your text is often too big. Vertical text boxes/bubbles are always annoying, but here you can easily stay within the borders without having to resort to white stroking for most of them.
2. Hyphens happen BEFORE, not after.

Sen-
sei

and not

Sen
-sei

3. You need to redraw. Redrawing has honestly never been so easy nowadays. Try out Firefly in Photoshop. Also, in-deph redrawing guide below.
4. Your sentence structure is trying to copy Japanese grammatical structures, phrasing, and expressions waaaay too much. The result is stilted, and sometimes wrong, translations.

Example: p.4 "But sometimes I feel a strong gaze from his side." > "But sometimes I feel/catch him staring a hole into me." or "But sometimes I feel/catch him devouring me with his eyes."
Example: p.5 "I hate it, as always. // This crowded train..." > "Packed, as always. // I hate that."

Guides:

General: https://quicksandscans.wordpress.com/resources/
Typesetting: https://web.archive.org/web/20150408105241/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?3308-Typesetting-introduction
Redrawing: https://web.archive.org/web/20150421210157/http://www.redhawkscans.com/showthread.php?7057-Rain-s-Redraw-Tutorials

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love this author. great job man!

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page 3 bottom left panel
when she talks about the son, the way that's phrased makes it sound like the son is not biologically related to the father and is from a previous marriage before Hiromi.
granted I have not read this beyond the first few pages as this art doesn't appeal to me so this very well could be the case.

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Great, many thanks! I`ve waited for translation of this manga very long time.

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I know there are some errors here and there, this is just a hobby i had and also, i dont have any resources to re-draw some parts of this doujin. It is just that I've wanted some of the works of hazuki kaoru to be translated and i found a way to do them myself.
I will be posting the rest of the parts of this series in the coming days...

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in p.23 it says "Mother-in-Law" instead of "Step-Mother",
other than that, Thank you, great job!

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Reminded me of Devilman artist

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