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02: premis => premise
03: He really funny
- missing verb => He's really funny
05: show => shower
06: boyfrined => boyfriend
07: Aright
- interjection => All right
07: loose control => lose control
08: Don't so childish
- missing verb => Don't be so childish
09: I;m => I'm
11: Alirhgt => Alright / All right
12: I was knock out
- participle needed => I was knocked out
12: booz => booze
12: rihgt => right
18: herd => heard
19: I kept call
- participle needed => I kept calling
19: What ever => Whatever
30: to by => to buy
30: these underwear [...] it's
- inconsistent number => these underwear [...] they're
32: I'm just holding them just to stop you
- redundant => I'm holding them just to stop you
33: more than every before
- idiom => more than ever

Also more punctuation would be welcome.

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Someone should Lali know his translator is dogshit

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I'm sure Jason will be a real bro and buy him a gaming console.

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What she gonna do if bf break with her. Cuz i 100% black dude leave her in instant after she break up with boyfriend. Its can be golden story if laliberte time to time do good ending for cuck. And regret for hoe like he did in Yui after story where douche cheating on her and she delusional try belive everything its OK.

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Another future single mother.

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Laliberte girls are very hot! And all doujinshi should be uncensored. Thanks man.

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@mrFlashDrive He did ask for a new translator on twitter, but no one applied.

Even someone who don't know korean using deepL would do a better job than that. I hope the translator does it for free.

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BBC is the future

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I was hoping he'd fuck the guy next

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@Christopher Rive
Feel free to drink the bottles under your sink

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