Some feedback:
1. Proofread before publishing. I see quite a few misspellings and grammatical errors.
2. Instead of making multiple caption images with the same exact image you can try to compact them into fewer images or even one image.
Alternatively you can look for some different images to changes things up a bit. I'm even okay with AI-generated images.
3. If there is enough text to fill a page or more in a text document then perhaps its better to turn this into a short story and publish it somewhere else. Like archiveofourown.org

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