read like japanese manga

pls stop just voting bad because its scenes, i really love to create these and have big respect for all who draw.. we are not rivals

i even bought an phone the phone app comica so i can make high resolution pics.. its just a hobby where i improve over time

i go to work and gym, i really love to draw but i am perfectionist to drawing and it consumes way to much time than

just by the way i think this work was well done with angles, photoshop and writing its enjoyable i think ^^

also i edit my works, while i am at work or going at the gym its a relaxing hobby to say

Base +2, PlutoniumBoss -6, Engildarkpod -6, eskhahe -6, Vera Hapi -6, Kues -6, mar-bcrle -6

well, as someone who loves his own hobby, here some tips to improve:

1. Have someone proofread the English text, there are several places, where there are better words to use.
2. The panel content has a very low resolution, compared to the total page/image. Either spend more time on rendering the panel, so it is clearer, or reduce the size of the page, so the panel resolution is closer to the actual page.

these should be the 2 main reasons, why your stories are down-voted.

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