Author: Takk

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03: i had already tied my hands
- implies he did it himself, unlikely => i had my hands tied
03: if it's a crime against my money => if you are after my money
04: he never understand
- third person => he never understands
05: you're already get
- present continuous needs a participle => you're already getting
06: you wanted
- present rather? => you want
06: i really liked it
- present rather => i really like it
08: you are already feel
- present continuous needs a participle => you are already feeling
09: you've been for
- missing adjective => you've been [?] for
09: make me go home
- letting rather? => let me go home
09: he ejaculates
- past deed rather => he ejaculated

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