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(C102) [Flicker10 (Kuronyan)] Natsu No Owari [English]

(C102) [Flicker10 (くろニャン)] 夏の終わり [英訳]

Doujinshi
Posted:2023-09-13 11:15
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Language:English  TR
File Size:41.23 MiB
Length:37 pages
Favorited:531 times
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Average: 4.32

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Posted on 13 September 2023, 11:15 by:   WhatAreThose21    PM
Uploader Comment
Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2673865/b7420e751a/

I translated this myself. Do excuse any foolish mistake as this is my first translate and I'm still learning Japanese myself.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 11:46 by:   cybeast93    PM
Score +202
You should've taken your time doing this. It was released literally yesterday.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 12:58 by:   DarrenC123    PM
Score +88
I'd say the issue isn't your Japanese but your English, there are a bunch of vocabulary and grammar mistakes. They are pretty minor so it's easy to self-correct when reading compared to unedited MTL, but they are there.

Examples:
Page 5 - She also left for college but she was married last year. She comes back to give birth.
Correct - She left for college but she got married last year. She is coming back here to give birth.

Page 8 - I figured you won't be happy for me. That's not true... Um... Congratulation
Correct - I figured you wouldn't be happy for me. That's not true... Um... Congratulations
Posted on 13 September 2023, 13:21 by:   nothing19    PM
Score +104
instead getting horny, why im feeling sad reading this doujin
Posted on 13 September 2023, 13:21 by:   PhantomRenegade    PM
Score +44
That was very bittersweet. Thanks for the Translation
Posted on 13 September 2023, 13:25 by:   B4z73rd    PM
Score +28
@nothing19 @PhantomRenegade You kinda already can guess from raws that it obviously was a bittersweet ending.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 14:58 by:   Lolipop Candy    PM
Score +69
oh..... she got a daughter. Good news : "If you can't marry the mom, marry her daughter then"
Posted on 13 September 2023, 15:19 by:   B4z73rd    PM
Score +22
@WhatAreThose21 on Pg 14 you repeated "Went to" twice, you should go back and fix these kinds of mistakes.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 16:27 by:   valesauce    PM
Score -28
This is a new level of retarded slut.
Posted on 13 September 2023, 18:07 by:   WhatAreThose21    PM
Score +14
@DarrenC123 thanks for the comment, I'll try proofreading a bit more next time if I ever have time.
Posted on 14 September 2023, 00:25 by:   Forgunia    PM
Score +50
I know it's hentai and that this story is meant to be bittersweet, but you have to be an especially nasty person to cheat while in that stage of pregnancy while also having been just married. What a skank. Dude isn't any better, though, for having sex with a pregnant married woman.
Last edited on 14 September 2023, 07:40.
Posted on 14 September 2023, 18:08 by:   pleomaxx    PM
Score +5
who tagged this as NTR? cheating maybe but NTR?
Posted on 15 September 2023, 11:10 by:   Forgunia    PM
Score +17
@pleomaxx, because there are unfortunately people who erroneously consider stories like this one where a guy has feelings for the girl to be netorare if she cannot be his, even if she is in a relationship from the very start and is only using the guy for sex and nothing more.

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