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Raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2315209/10a6b42e86/

Dencensored by Ra3byou aka me.

What are you even doing? This decensoring is less than desirable (Not completely decensored btw), not to mention the pixelated typeset EVERYWHERE! I'm not going to bother having my translation group point out the mistakes you made on both the translation and grammar but it's clear you have no intent to respect the author and their work.
We at Kinsei Translations have already been commissioned to work on this and we expect to have a TRUE translation out sometime in the next 30 days.
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Edit: I'm guessing your having a mini-panic attack right now with these rapid-fire revisions. Just take the L and go have a cold shower.
Edit 2: Done. https://e-hentai.org/g/2662327/995a405ea8/

Last edited on 13 September 2023, 08:44.

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p.3 At the usual time // The unchanging Yuknoshita > misspelled name and also still nonsense.
p.4 let see
p.4 will hesitate pay
p.5 i want to see it to the end > watch it. to "see something [to the end]" means something completely different
p.9 embarassing
p.10 n,no... // only you... > more contextualized stuff that needs to be spelled out to make sense in English. "N-no... // you're the only one for me." or something like that
p.14 that... no... > did you mean "that's... not..."?
p.14 Yukino have

edit: I love how you're trying to update your sentences to try to make them sound human. Maybe a few more attempts and you'll get something that doesn't read like dialogue out of a dream directed by David Lynch.

Last edited on 23 July 2023, 12:14.

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Damn, lotta people mad about the words in a low tier ntr

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Oh hey it's this uploader again delivering another hit piece. Only the finest MTLs!

Last edited on 02 October 2023, 00:49.

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Bro why not instead of throwing insults and prepping your own work offer some advice and respect the time he's put into learning in attempting to work on the edits. I'm sure you're great at what you do but I doubt you were originally and you likely got some pointers along the way. Be a mentor or at worst a critic. Never an asshole.

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@Xionano So what? Critics are all nice people? I clearly pointed out his decensoring needs improvement* and that his translation has mistakes, but in your book that apparently makes me an "asshole"? (Yes he's made quite a few changes/improvements and yes there's still some censorship present, but if he were to just do the editing and have someone that actually understood Japanese this wouldn't be an issue). Cutegyaru has already pointed out that this person is using MTL on the first work (https://e-hentai.org/g/2617050/cb8fc830ec/) and said user has carried it over here with some changes.

The time for lessons are over and done and I'm not going to pull punches. Repeat offenders do not get a pass in my book. You want to teach him a different language and/or how to edit? Go right ahead, just don't ask said "critics" or "assholes" to do it.

Edit: And now your bumping your previous gallery to avoid the finger wagging show you created (https://e-hentai.org/g/2674379/771e88d83b/). What text did you exactly change to make this update valid?

Last edited on 13 September 2023, 12:13.

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Just expunge then.

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