Here's the full version of my Patreon comic, The Gob-Queen's Request. Apologies if the ending makes little sense out of context. There is a non-illustrated short story prequel I wrote for this comic which ties in to a lot of my other Seventh Realm pinups and comics and it also explains why Betty was turned into the Gob-Queen's daughter in the first place. That story will be uploaded shortly to my deviantArt and Furaffinity pages.

Some quick answers though!

The stone in the last page is called a Cornerstone of the Realm, and it along with its many sibling stones are immensely powerful magical artefacts capable of changing the reality of the Seventh Realm.

Goblins in this realm aren't money-hoarders but their Luck skill is just well passed the maximum. Nothing bad ever happens to a Seventh Realm Goblin.

I would have liked to draw more sharks but I ran out of time and I was a little tired of drawing this comic around the last 2 pages. I had tried to draw this comic according to a streamlined method of keeping each page to a standard 3-5 frames per page and the basic frame layout. In the end this was just too confined and I kinda hated it x)

Also, by sheer coincidence, page 14 was uploaded exactly one year after I had uploaded the first pinup of the Gob-queen

Anyway, if you enjoyed this, feel free to check out my other content. On patreon I upload things usually a month in advance. And there are two different long-form porn comics being worked on, both are already 6 pages in.

https://www.patreon.com/KimRinzley
https://www.deviantart.com/kimrinzley
https://www.furaffinity.net/user/dangercat

Really nice work, enjoyed it, thanks.
Giving 4.5 / 5.

But i didn't get the point anyway: is he once was a goblin chick then was transformed into a human and brainwashed?.. or he was "chosen" just now and was transformed to become a goblin chick?..
The sharks... imho, kobolds would do better.
I'd also introduce some more characters in the camp, as they could be useful in later story.

Another thought: i guess it's very time consuming - to keep this kind of art. Maybe you should make flat colors or just lineart stories, then color and shade them if it'd be worth that?

Last edited on 15 September 2023, 17:19.

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@IvanGo

Those questions and more are answered, kinda, in a short story that you can access right here https://www.patreon.com/posts/84962311

Also, I could just do plain linework, but the thing is that I really enjoy doing this the way that I am doing it. I've tried in the past to limit myself to just lineart and it only occasionally feels right for me. Maybe in the future I'll find a simpler groove I'll enjoy, but for now I just like this :)

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To be continued ?

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GOOD END! I love this one.

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I'd honestly love to see a Ling extended story following Betty. 5/5 stars. I don't regret anything. The story and da art are just beautiful.

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Aw man, the non-illustrated short story prequel link doesn't show up.

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