rough start when you have the return of the hand errors especially in the images that the post is not particularly Provokative so they are more obvious (Lack of distraction), and you really need to figure out how to unify lighting because you can't have a sparkly outfit then sloppy lighting, it makes the outfit look like it has bits of plastic glued to it and the lighting look like they are made of cut together other images. but the thing i have to mark you hardest for is the key feature on a non-nude portrait, the head and face, first the good, the mouthes and noses work together, you don't have any clearly wrong ones, no melted mouths, no noses that don't line up, but your ears could do some work, there are places where the ear-ring and ear result in some painful looking messes, but that's forgivable, what isn't forgiveable is the Eyes, dear god the eyes, you have some horror movie eyes in this, i would use these as example images for "the eyes of the monster disguised as a person" you have misshapen pupils, mis shapen sclaria, you have Double pupils, you have Double Sclaria, you have Double Eyes In One Eye, you have Smeared eyes, and you have eyes with the texture of leather, in a portrait eyes are important, in a non-nude one the face is the strongest point, and the eyes become So much more important.

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