Stop posting this CRAP

Raw https://e-hentai.org/g/161599/e4aba5fc72/

@kinox3, if you want read his rewrites go on his blog it simple

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@marconii2002, then, you go to post in english manga and with a excellent translation.

-oh, excuse me for not being able to translate from the Japanese language, awkward...-

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Except, you know, making stuff up as you go along is a waste of time and web space. I'll never grasp the point of rewrites. Go write some erotica if you feel like making stuff up. Don't dump your junk on someone else's work.

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BULLSHIT !!!!!

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I don't want to sound rude but this dudes writing sucks more them the average fan-fiction.

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If this sucks so much then why is it at this in the Top 25 albums for August????

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Translated version: https://e-hentai.org/g/316978/b9ec17e41e/

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i hate censored
put the doujinshi decensored it will help u

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