the chapter 0 on bad quality was a test to see how e-hentai works, Resolution upgraded.
Enjoy Chapter 1 for free just for once, chapter 2 will be uploaded on patreon today, it will be free on 21 days.

>plz gib monis so I can deliver more slop
Sometimes I can't tell if you guys are just trolling or actually this stupid.

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That you would beg for money for something of this low quality is astounding.

Trying to bait people into giving you money for this slop means you're a scammer. Fucking sad.

1. Your font is fucking unreadable.
2. This is very clearly machine translated with only the bare minimum of human editing. Also, poor grammar everywhere. Learn Japanese. And English.
3. You upscaled this because you don't understand how to export. It's blurry as fuck, compounding the problem in 1.
4. Your cleaning is poor and your redrawing is nonexistent.

rough translation

Page 5
Your TL: Then why don't you come with me?
JP: なら一緒ににどうかしら？
Intent: She's asking him if they can eat together, not if he could follow her to her place (duh?)

Page 5
Your TL: If you don't mind, do it with me!
JP: オ・・・オレなんかでよけれぜひッ！
Intent: Your line makes 0 sense because you mistranslated the previous one too. "A-absolutely! If you don't mind my company, that is."

Page 6
Your TL: I wanna eat my wife!
JP: オレ奥さんを食べたいッス
Intent: This is so wrong it's actually hilarious. His wife?

Page 6
Your TL: It's not good to have such a sloppy body after having impregnated sex with your husband
JP: 主人と孕まセックスしまくったこんなだらしのない体なんて美味しくないわよ
Intent: Wrong speaker, wrong meaning, wrong everything.

Page 7
Your TL: The ripe womb in the back of my loose pussy... is the best
JP: ユルユルマンコ [...]
Intent: Wrong speaker, again. Also, nonsense.

Page 7
Your TL: Cock in my womb, which only I've ever been inside
JP: 主人しか入った事
Intent: Nonsense, but also referring to her husband.

Page 7
Your TL: Lick your wife's ketchup-soaked cock
JP: 奥さんのケツ汁
Intent: LMAO what the fuck is going on here

Page 7
Your TL: A married woman's wife
JP: 人妻さん・・・最高美味しいぜ
Intent: More nonsense. A married woman's wife, huh.

Page 8
Your TL: That wasn't the case with beef stew.
JP: ビーフシチュー [...]
Intent: What case? Since you completely mangled the previous line, this also makes 0 sense. Hint: 美味しい

Page 10
Your TL: I really do want to have a personality in my uniform.
JP: やっぱ制服にも個性欲しいじゃ～ん
Intent: Idk what you're trying to say. She's saying she wants to show off her individuality by styling her uniform, something apparently everyone does in Tokyo.

rough grammar

p.5 I don't think you ate > eat
p.5 So if you'd like. > incomplete sentence
p.6 after having impregnated sex
p.7 Cock in my womb, which only I've ever been inside > nonsense
p.7 her loose anus > why is my man talking in 3rd person when he's very obviously talking TO her
p.7 ketchup-soaked > this makes 0 sense. this entire bubble is complete nonsense
p.8 a married woman's wife > let's keep the nonsense going, I guess
p.9 desu > not English
p.10 I guess my old school is in its own way > What? There's something missing.
p.10 I got an order from the store > You mean, "I ordered something from the store?"

There's literally no redeeming qualities here. You're just the embodiment of everything wrong with modern scanlation (I'm being generous here because you neither scanned nor translated this.)

Oh, and I've reported your Patreon.

Last edited on 04 October 2023, 08:28.

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ummm neck yourself scammer

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You charge money for this shit? LOL

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tf is this garbage round 2

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I'm impressed you have the audacity to call this a translation. Kill yourself

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I wish I could give this less than half a star.

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>"Enjoy Chapter 1 for free just for once, chapter 2 will be uploaded on patreon today, it will be free on 21 days."
Hey, I got an idea. Why dont you keep your precious translation exclusive to your patreon and don't post here at all?

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Huh...I lost the motivation a while back to work on stuff, got 2 copies of this tank to scan one and get it done eventually after past JKP I had been working on was finished, but... Now I'm feeling really motivated to do this tank with scans. If anyone is for some reason thinking of giving this dude money for utter crap, save it, I'm gonna be spending all of my free time now getting this the treatment it deserves.

@Kam
Screw you for doing this kind of crap to John K Peta's work. He doesn't deserve your garbage. Go do some shenanigans in Minecraft.

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Please do @theamdrag. John K Peta does really great work what Kam is doing is a complete lack of respect.

Looking forward to your real translation

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Is it possible for someone else to step in and re-translate this garbage?

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