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What is this translation... it is so confusing.

Here is the original https://e-hentai.org/g/1813015/244accb3f3/

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@drobby Like a bunch of other schlock ending up here, it's probably machine translated or the poster does not understand the language enough.

Last edited on 05 October 2023, 20:10.

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@rawru more than likely its machine translated and its a low quality effort with the text looking half assed to hell what worse is that i was really interested in seeing what the sequel of the original was all about too.

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I was just looking for the first chapter to this the other day and then this gets uploaded lol

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Yeah I'm confused too.
Also, if you got paid more than $10 to translate this you've scammed the poor bastard

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I'm not really sure how everyone finds this so confusing. She want's an amazing body and get's told no because that's not really a "goal" more of an ideal. The boss of the "god" from the first one appears basically threatening her and saying that his subordinate was stupid. And the asteroid thing is saying how he once was like her but is now stuck granting other people's wishes because he wished too much. Then the subordinate appeared talking about running an errand and that his boss was screwing with her. Also the person that commissioned the translation was happy with it so I see no problems. If they did have an issue with it then I would have fixed it for them. Also, to translate I go through and translate it myself then use a program to cross-check that what I already translated was correct. If anything the original work is poorly written and quite confusing, which is why it was hard to translate well.

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Part 1: https://e-hentai.org/g/1590763/ac6cbade41/

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I liked the first one, but this one is very confusing.

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yeah the translation is really weird.

but at least someone did it

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