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Cleaning, Typesetting, Lettering: Xzosk
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do smellfags REALLY?

couple of things:

0) i hope some of these descriptions draw out a gag or nosewrinkle of disgust, because reading it in japanese sure fucking did for me

1) Toki already speaks in a fairly detached manner in Japanese, but this ramps up to 11 when she goes into Mission Mode partway through this book. She begins using outright anatomical terms and very military/impersonal speech. Getting this across properly was a challenge but I think it turned out great. Not only is her dialogue different when this happens, but the font is too. I hope you fuckers like Latin!

2) On page 8, Toki makes repeated use of food-related similes (one related to tea, another to breakfast). I inserted a reference to one of her in-game desired items, which is the Health Food Supplement gift: https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/1098431289092227112/1159550287183347802/image.png

3) On page 9, Toki tells Sensei she's got some previous experience in dicks which is why she knows so much about the subject of ED or whatever. The raw is: 「僭越ですが以前お仕えしていた方のもとでもよくやっておりましたからー」 Now, there is some ambiguity here as to whether she means a previous employer (whether it's Rio à la page 7, or some previous unknown man) OR if she's referring to her previous line of work, i.e., prostitution or something. The ambiguity stems from the 「以前お仕えしていた方のもと」 part. To me, because I'm just no good at Japanese, it could refer to either an employer or a line of work. Thankfully some ambiguity in English saves my ass because "my previous employer" could also refer to a life of prostitution. I'm literally cheating here.

4) re: page 37: Bunny Toki isn't out yet (only a few days left!!!) so I don't actually know how Global will handle naming her EX skill. In Japanese it's アームギア or "Armgear," so that's what we went with here (actually Xzosk thought to look it up, I had no idea it had anything to do with her kit idk i play global not jp). Hopefully this doesn't carbon date us. Though knowing Nexon's BA localization team they'll either fuck it up or just put zero effort in and leave it as Armgear.

5) Page 37 guest artist stuff:
- https://e-hentai.org/tag/artist:fuugetsu+makoto (only has content in the non-h section)
- https://www.pixiv.net/users/32669

P-parmesan cheese…

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:sniffa:

Your comment is too short

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toki，太涩了！我要设toki满满一脸口牙！

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Imagine...

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"It should've been me, not him! It's not fair!"

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soooo cute

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Imagine the smell.

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Damn, if this is how he treats Toki in regards to smell, I can't even imagine what his Ui doujin would be like.

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Thanks Toki, now I'm ready.
BRING ME THE OTHER C&C GIRLS!!!

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A hint of what

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Thank you for the translation and effort. Your TL notes are very interesting as well.
Toki is best maid.

P.S. I thought the next banner would be a rerun with Marina and Cherino. When is Bunny Toki going to be added?

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B.Toki is still at least 2 or 3 banners away iirc

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damn, who let LTG in here?

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@Forties
stay seething bro. Maybe you should vent in the spdg thread or something.

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Goddamn, randomly putting Rio on blast with page 7. Did not expect that.

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Pg.15 I thought she was going to make him push himself up in order to lick her, missed opportunity. 😔

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Thanks for the translation!
Toki is love, Toki is life.

Also RIP the Armgear translation, it was translated to Gauntlet.

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why fap when you have Toki?

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I had to spark her and don't have enought for M. Aris...
My luck sucks so bad bros...

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Couldn't fap, too busy howling with laughter.

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I was too busy laughing to fap. 10/10

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I was too busy fapping to laugh. 10/10

Last edited on 16 August 2024, 21:19.

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