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Base +3, tobeunforgiven2 +26

The Series in English TR:
1. https://e-hentai.org/g/2709688/791cce877a/
2. https://e-hentai.org/g/2709695/6b57bc2f0b/
3. https://e-hentai.org/g/2709699/e8f0bd7c68/
4. https://e-hentai.org/g/2709702/309f990d57/

The raws
1. https://e-hentai.org/g/2413126/5774024f19/
2. https://e-hentai.org/g/2446116/5bb243abf4/
3. https://e-hentai.org/g/2515133/53944d0eb4/
4. https://e-hentai.org/g/2620419/c90b919fa0/

Base +54, as102 +13, Jyohan +6, tobeunforgiven2 +26

03: demon, mysterious entity that steals
- generality, prefer plural => demons, mysterious entities that steal
03: aren't not enough => aren't enough
14: to stubborn => too stubborn
18: the areas [...] is
- inconsistent number => the areas [...] are
21: dont => don't

Base +8, Ahegaosensei +6, Nucleara -6, Nioda +27, Jyohan +6, tobeunforgiven2 +26