@Vulkandrache I agree didn't know whether to change but that's what it says, maybe hose isn't considered clothing?
working on two more chapters
Last edited on 21 February 2023, 21:53.
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Posted on 20 February 2023, 23:50 by: Vulkandrache
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First command: "Take of all your clothes". Still standing there with half the underwear on. Why do Mind Control stories do this?
Edit: Im not blaming you for doing a accurate translation.
It hurts the entire suspension of disbelief when the orders given dont fit to whats happening as a result. Especialy in stories like this which have zero intention of allowing the victim to fight back.
Imagine this in a different fetish porn like say bdsm. A woman gets tied up and then a few pages later she slips her hand ot of the rope to scratch her nose.
Last edited on 23 February 2023, 22:35.
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the artist apparently have a fetish for stockings/pantyhose and I'm all for it
they probably just thought it's sexy and it's a minor trade off for more natural phrasing, not thinking too serious about it. Not that I mind anyway, she's still submissive and manipulatable as it should be