Okay... i redid it with Balloon translator and some manual edits...
Little bit better now?

How about you stop disowning galleries upon galleries of MTL crap you fucking mouth-breathing retard.

Here's your previous handiwork:
https://e-hentai.org/g/2694327/716fc35f60/

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>Little bit better now?
no

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0.5 star. If I could give less, I would. Stop spamming bad translations.

Last edited on 20 October 2023, 21:23.

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I have questions about the socioeconomics of the world within this story.

Base +6, lolteambleach1 +6, akoldon +6

E-hentai GP farming meta in a nutshell

Step 1. Post MTL gallery
Step 2. Get GP from visits and archive download
Step 3. Wait until the disown period is over
Step 4. Disown gallery
Step 5. Repeat steps 1-4

Now no one knows who uploaded the translation and no actual good translation gets made for the gallery

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This is legit one of the worst translations I've ever read.

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Report him on the forum. GP farming like that is really annoying and prevent some galleries to get a proper translation.

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"He's coming so many times from being raped. She's a total bitch".... cmon man, and you said that you "supposedly" redid the translation with manual edits.

Base +6, Lololotex +6, RPGduder +6, trapfapp +6, kagezoro +6, YuzuJuice +11

I see people complain that this somehow makes no real translation not get made, but honestly thats bullshit. There's tons of shit people just never get around to translating. I prefer a MTL to not having anything at all.

I ain't gonna pay a comission to get stuff translated so I'll take hwat I can get. If you're mad this doesn't have a real translation, go comission one.

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Instead of just posting it here again, you could try asking someone to review it for you. You don't have to know Japanese to see it's poorly done.

Base +34, RPGduder +6, kagezoro +6, YuzuJuice +11, Jalouin +6

it's beyond just bad translation. it's barely readable english. reading a single text bubble makes me double back because it makes no fucking sense. Learn English first retard

Base +6, RPGduder +6, kagezoro +6, derpfap123 +8, YuzuJuice +11, Jalouin +6

The premise and fetish scenarios are good and the art is nice. I wish it were longer and more fleshed out. Still having a new cuck get gangbanged in front of their ex girlfriend that is having sex with a former rival is top 10 in the cuckold fetish scenario list.

The translation is shit though. Machine translated and not even proofread. They could have at least made the gender pronouns consistent by character but they didn't even bother.

Art 7. Plot 8. Sexiness 8. Translation 2. All out of 10.

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