I've forgotten about this for a long time, but the person who added the text slightly changed some of it from the script I had given him. I didn't mention it way back then because I was already working on something else and also didn't want to go through the whole awkward "You did this wrong" criticism for what I felt were minor things.
p.2 The world cut off by the viewfinder.
p.7 The world cut off on the other side; every time, rises to my absolute desires.

Also, I'd like to say sorry about the second part of Iyokan's wind cries, I translated that while deployed and never got a chance to send the list of cultural notes (and touch up the translation...) like I did for the first part due to the external HDD I was using to move stuff from my laptop to the computers with internet dying.

Dunno why I felt like writing this here.

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