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[Chirinu Iroha] Hakoiri Musume wa Pet ni Ochiru -Zenpen- | A young spoiled girl falls into a pet... - Part 1 (COMIC Kaien Vol. 01) [English] [Script Cave] [Digital]

[ちりぬいろは] 箱入り娘は愛玩奴隷に堕ちる-前編- (COMIC 快艶 VOL.01) [英訳] [DL版]

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Posted:2023-11-01 18:00
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Language:English  TR
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Posted on 01 November 2023, 18:00 by:   JnTo    PM
Uploader Comment
Translator: https://e-hentai.org/uploader/Comoop
Editor: JnTo

Not part of a group? Want to edit stuff without having any deadline or obligation to do anything?
Get scripts there, edit them, and publish them :)
https://discord.gg/K9kDG6b8
Posted on 02 November 2023, 21:03 by:   johngalt13    PM
Score +30
This is the best scans group page I've ever seen.
Posted on 03 November 2023, 13:04 by:   Azerty72200    PM
Score +11
Poor girl...
Posted on 05 November 2023, 06:16 by:   vaporeon天蝎宫    PM
Score +34
It's not "not enough", but "we don't accept cards here" on the first page. Thanks for translation.
Posted on 18 February 2024, 11:29 by:   rsx205    PM
Score +113
translation aside, I'm not sure how much I'd rely on those scripts. I skimmed over a few on that server and even the transcriptions aren't entirely accurate either

at the very least you can definitely tell they're not being transcribed by hand. if they ARE being transcribed by hand, then they're not being transcribed with human eyes. anyway I'd be careful with them

001
OG: カードでお願いします…
TL: "Please use your card..."
ED: wrong speaker

OG: カードはちょっと…
TL: "It's not enough..."
ED: they don't take cards

003
OG: お嬢それセルフだよ
TL: "You're from a rich family right?"
ED: completely made up translation

OG: えっ!!?そうなんですか…
TL: "Eh?! What's that...
ED: she's reacting in shock to the information she just received, not asking for information

OG: 友達も作れなかった私に…
TL: "I didn't have any friends."
ED: "I couldn't make any friends..."

OG: 声を掛けてくれたのも彼です
TL: N/A
ED: missing line

OG: 一人だったら一緒に食べない?
TL: "If you're alone, why don't you eat with us?"
ED: why is he plural?

OG: すみませ~ん
TL: N/A
ED: missing line

006
OG: いつもしつこく誘ってごめんね
TL: "I'm sorry I'm always pestering you."
ED: missing detail on what he pesters her about

OG: お嬢は経験無いだろうなって
TL: "I don't think you've ever had anything like that."
ED: this makes it sound like he doesn't believe her own experiences vs the "normal" experiences he talks about on the previous panel

008
OG: ハイ
TL: Hi.
ED: ??? this is some cursed levels of MTL

OG: 俺アガリ~!
TL: "Agari!"
ED: you didn't even attempt to translate this and just removed the pronoun

OG: お嬢〜ナニぼさっとしてんの〜?
TL: "Miss, why are you so lazy?"
ED: he is not questioning her work ethic

and plenty more in the following pages

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