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Why do you use the same picture over and over with different text boxes? That's kinda lazy and makes this a poor advertisement for your gumroad/patreon.

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The text boxes over the action is the best part ;o)

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@Roarin Thunder
It's worse due to the text being really boring and spread out. A series of captions with a page or a few paragraphs of short story for each separate image would work better and it's a common format for porn captions.

6-15 is just describing the character's appearance which we can clearly see.
17-22 is just a description of D&D tieflings.
26-28 is wrong. Only a small percentage of Tieflings are infertile. They reproduce normally with the chance of Teifling off spring varying based on what the other partner is.
29 is weirdly describing an expected progression of age in partners as she got older. Okay? Just describing that is not sexy or deviant. Did the writer think it is?

I imagine this entire thing being read in a bored monotone. It reads like a kid's bland book report they didn't want to do and thought it was acceptable to use a few sentences per page to pad out to a minimum page number. That isn't even unique to this gallery, looking at the other ones from this artist most are the same with a very bland "story" stretched out over a few repeated images. A few are only a bit better due to different writers causing the quality of the text to vary.

Last edited on 13 November 2023, 07:47.

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