This gallery contains some images from a story by the same name at https://archiveofourown.org/works/44499064/chapters/111927253

Looks good!

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Thank you!

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Looks great. Please keep on.

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interesting

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Thanks! I’m happy to learn that Mary Marvel and the Shazam family can generate some interest here!

This story has only just begun!

Just added some bonus Mary Marvel pictures and homages after the story

Pages 16 to 27 are new

Last edited on 15 May 2024, 03:44.

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One of the best Comics i have ever read. Thank You und please keep on the good work,

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Thank you! We still have a long way to go with this story!

Don't look for any new images since yesterday. This update was simply cleaning up some errors that were bugging me.

Looks like this story was slapped with the lolicon tag (not too surprising,really, even though the young Mary is never shown naked), so users of the restricted e-hentai site will probably lose access soon. But this story will still be on the other site even if that happens.

Last edited on 17 May 2024, 00:33.

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Thanks for keeping us up to date, Tooshoes! Looking forward to future pages/chapters!

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Saw the thumbnail and guessed correctly that this is the supergirl's secret power writer even though the quality looked much better.

I'm giving your more recent stories 2 stars now instead of 1.5,
as I have to say that your font type and placement has gotten a lot better.
Placement of people is getting really good as well.

The one thing that's sticking out like a sore thumb
is still the inconsistencies in the character drawings due to AI,
although the first three panels of page 2 and page 7,
and page 23 is very promising.

Since the AI inconsistencies are
still extremely distracting to me,
I'll refrain from commenting on the story itself.

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more please

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Thanks to all, and for the constructive criticism! More is coming, hopefully by next week.

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