Commissioned by me. Translated by Poranya.

RAW: https://e-hentai.org/g/1563073/9791339e89/

will there be a sequel where she does make a homunculus and take another smell of that aphrodisiac before starting the fun?

Base +6

01: The love potion [...] let's see
- Japanese syntax => Let's see the love potion [...]
01: My nipples are against my clothes
- incoherent: wouldn't be a problem normally; missing participle?
03: to good => too good
07: on it's own
- possessive => on its own
07: my first time
- incomplete clause? => for my first time / it's my first time

Base +9