My translation of the work (C102) [bannoutumayoujiire (Bitou)] Ganyu Zangyouchuu 2 (Genshin Impact).
Buy the original here : https://www.melonbooks.co.jp/detail/detail.php?product_id=2063766

1. The text is absurdly small in places.

2. Your translation is very wordy and full of basic grammar errors, you should get a proofreader.

3. Text on the first panel is nigh unreadable

4. If you don't know Japanese and barely know English, why do you even attempt this?

So no. This quality is not acceptable. Show this to a normal person before you even think of uploading it.

Dear god man.

"SInce then, he have been possessed multiple times, and I must take some responsibility for it"

Last edited on 20 November 2023, 06:30.

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If your English isn't that good you could have translated it to your mother language...

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