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[Taiyoukei Kaihatsu Kikou (Marubayashi Shumaru)] Minor Planet No. 134340 (Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Moon) [English] [Hyarugu] [Digital]

[太陽系開発機構 (○林修○)] minor planet No.134340 (美少女戦士セーラームーン) [英訳] [DL版]

Doujinshi
Posted:2010-08-21 06:39
Parent:None
Visible:Yes
Language:English  TR
File Size:10.77 MiB
Length:30 pages
Favorited:234 times
Rating:
92
Average: 4.59

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Posted on 21 August 2010, 06:39 by:   Trite    PM
Uploader Comment
A bounty I commissioned. Translated by Hyarugu and edited by Super Shanko. Thanks guys! I really appreciate it.
Posted on 30 August 2010, 22:18 by:   RoyM    PM
Score +23
I'm an egg/tentacle person, so I loved this.

The shading on the final few images was really wonderful, and the first part was obviously hot. The frame where the egg protrudes from her anus is crazy hot.
Posted on 07 May 2013, 06:42 by:   hyarugu    PM
Score +18
Some corrections: on page 4/5 the last/first bubble was faultily duplicated so there is one missing (which actually should be there in the translation script i think).

concerning translation errors:
page09:
-"Don't worry. With this ass of yours you'll be able to lay the eggs easily..."
>a more accurate translation would be: "It's nothing to be ashamed of. In fact it'll make it easier for you to lay the eggs..."

page10 (fucked up all the lower bubbles back then -_-):
wrong:
-"seems the beautiful student is getting pretty turned on, huh...by getting her ass cultivated that is"
>should be more like: "you're enjoying it pretty much, huh? to think a beauty like you got her ass developed like that already..." (implying she had anal sex with other men before)

wrong:
-"kuun...that...that's not true...it's just...the enemies until now were..."
>should instead say something like: "that's not how it is...it's the fault of my enemies I encountered until now...", or the like. pretty cryptic but in short she simply wants to invalidate the impression of her being a slut.

wrong:
-"nevertheless, the spawning of the eggs has already started as expected, hasn't it?"
>correct translation: "but it sure at least is your first time being impregnated with eggs, isn't it"

wrong:
-"Hehehe... though you're an enemy, it turns out that you're no ordinary college student after all"
>it should be translated like this: "Ha! "Enemy" you say? So as expected you're no ordinary student after all!"

@Fffffff123:
eat shit and die
Posted on 09 March 2012, 02:13 by:   Anime Janai    PM
Score +10
Please let the original uploader who commissioned this item upload the update if deemed necessary.

Pluto is older than Queen Serenity, so who knows how many eggs have went her way in the past.
Posted on 09 March 2015, 22:06 by:   PrinceofPluto    PM
Score +1
I wish there was a groping and felt up by Kaolinite part, or a Germatoids minions ( the white Cyclop goon that frenches her) gangbang of her. and maybe a English version of the one with Neptune and Uranus.
Posted on 29 July 2015, 15:35 by:   Miles Edgeworth    PM
Score +83

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