How I become a Femboy Slave [Rewrite]

Posted on 02 December 2023, 21:10 by: brokendrumset

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Here is the original work I have translated and rewritten.

[Maita Keikaku (Sennomori Maitake)] Zoku Kaikan ♀(Mesu) Ochi ～Miyu, Shasei Kanri de Renzoku Akume〜 [Chinese] [瑞树汉化组] [Digital]

Posted on 02 December 2023, 21:27 by: Kight

no one asked for a rewrite

Posted on 03 December 2023, 00:55 by: Chaos1745

Imagine defiling this masterpiece with a rewrite.

Posted on 03 December 2023, 02:10 by: TT213

Change the font, use high quality images, fix the grammatical issues, never rewrite the story, don't re-translate what's already been done well (unless you uncensored it) and it will be good enough for most people.

Right now this honestly feels like itsy's (horrible) work on a alt account... Whoever you are take your time, clean translations are no easy feat but you can definitely improve on this.

Posted on 03 December 2023, 04:19 by: mt2009

Just like how personalized customization (almost) never raises the value of a house, you'll find people don't like it when you butcher an original work with your own fetishes.

Posted on 03 December 2023, 07:20 by: hobohobo

No one gonna comment on how the op removed 10 pages and mixed up the page order for the rest.

Posted on 03 December 2023, 08:24 by: superstarfish

i didn't know people actually posted rewrites here. that is fucking retarded

Posted on 03 December 2023, 08:49 by: hatex

Is there any actual translation? Couldn't find it here.

Posted on 03 December 2023, 09:29 by: claralover

don't think so, so the first english "translation" we have butchers it

Posted on 03 December 2023, 16:35 by: Reize1

Why would you do this? Did you honestly think anyone would appreciate it? Or do you simply enjoy making people angry?

Posted on 03 December 2023, 16:39 by: Kross25

The absolute state of translations. Either get some shit like this, or see Itsy butcher another doujin. Really makes you appreciate the good translators on here.

Posted on 04 December 2023, 01:28 by: whasup

Those Japanese classes are about to pay off.

Posted on 04 December 2023, 19:44 by: brokendrumset

To all the jerks here who are commenting. I could not find a real translation and didn't know how to translate it so I just looked at the pictures and moved things around to make a story for myself. The original is still around for everyone to read instead. I credited the original. If you don't enjoy it than just leave it a 1 star and leave the rest be. Some of you act like I I just kicked your child. Chill out please.

Posted on 05 December 2023, 05:43 by: Reize1

If you did it only for you then why did you post it here? If it was only for your own enjoyment then you could have kept it to yourself. By posting it here you have tacitly agreed to receive feedback. If the reception you receive is overwhelmingly negative that should tell you something. In my view the most offensive thing about this is not the rewrite itself, but the way you cut out a quarter of the artists own work and stitched the remainder together into a Frankensteinian parody of itself. It's equivocal to stolen valor.

Posted on 08 December 2023, 17:41 by: RexXIIIGfX

If you don't know how to translate it then don't post it until you find someone who can translate it. THEN translate it without the creepy crotch shot of your junk.

Posted:	2023-12-02 21:10
Parent:	None
Visible:	Yes
Language:	English RW
File Size:	55.06 MiB
Length:	29 pages
Favorited:	445 times

language:	english rewrite
parody:	original
group:	maita keikaku
artist:	sennomori maitake
male:	anal anal intercourse chastity belt crossdressing feminization garter belt males only rape slave stockings tomgirl yaoi
other:	incomplete multi-work series out of order

Rating:		218
Average: 1.95