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thanks for this

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>Man back then love to see this
Oh no.
>I should have wear it now
>If it wasn't creampie, we might won't go this crazy huh
Lines like these and a few others that, while grammatically correct, seem like unreasonable things to say, really kill the mood, and the mood this story sets is so good.

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@Shinryu-Rex
I agree, only those examples aren't actually grammatically correct, which is an important distinction in terms of creating gibberish. For instance, "colorless green ideas sleep furiously" is grammatically correct but also gibberish, whereas "if it wasn't creampie, we might won't go this crazy huh" is grammatically incorrect and gibberish. This is more a case of a translation error for those lines.

For your examples, the first is missing an article and the verb is conjugated incorrectly, the second is incorrect tense ("should have *worn*"), and with the third, "we might won't" = "we might will not" isn't a valid construction. Most of the translation is just fine; it just seems like they forgot to proofread a few lines.

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@ Shinryu-Rex kill yourself

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