For the first part, I mostly edited in the original translation : https://e-hentai.org/g/1866317/df8a980fb8/ as is, with a few changes to make it more in line with the raw. The second part was entirely translated by me. It's not perfect either, but at this point it's another one of these "if I don't, who will" situations. Still, feel free to point out any possible mistranslations.

Like the last time, I didn't bother translating every moan or panting sound, but for those who are really curious, here's a quick rundown of the ones that pop up the most:
ん: Hm/Mm
んん: Hmm/Mmm
はあ/ハア: Haa

raw: https://e-hentai.org/g/2183483/7d6b3d494f/

Obligatory "It should've been me, not him! It's not fair!" goes here

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How is this a manga? Isnt this supposed to be doujinshi?

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@SilverSound I honestly still don't know how does that category really work either. Just saw that all the previous versions of this were categorized as manga so I did the same.

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@SilverSound if you were to really go deep into technicalities, yes this would be considered a doujinshi. It's just more of this site's way of categorizing. And if there's something to note on it, it's that the site always categorizes original works under Manga while the parody works can be found under Doujinshi.

So if you were looking for stories with OC's from the artists, tag Manga. If you're in the mood for works that use anything from an already official and established title from whatever media (anime, manga, video game, etc.) then tag Doujinshi.

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The censorship in this is just too much. It's increased from this artist's earlier works.

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