other than the size fluctuations of Gwen being a foot taller than ben, this is actually pretty good

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Eh...TheWriteFiction dropped the ball on this one. The faces look really off putting, especially when they're facing sideways. The way their noses and heads are drawn were really wonky. Gwen was also made slightly taller than Ben, which is a bit odd because they're supposed to be around the same height. The sex scenes, while decently drawn, honestly felt a little rushed and we didn't see much variety in them. So yeah, this was a bit of a let down. Hopefully the next one will be better.

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Yeah the height gaps a bit too big but I think Gwen has always been like 2+ inches taller than Ben in all the shows except maybe Alien Force where they're the same height or Ben's slightly taller. IIRC there's an episode in the OG show where Ben's too short for a ride/slide but Gwen is taller than the minimum height required to go on it.

This is probably some AU where they're on their 2nd/3rd summer vacation road trip and Gwen got that early puberty that girls usually get over boys and is that much taller than Ben due to it. Also Ben doesn't have his Omnitrix so this could just be about cousin fucking during summer vacation and there's no aliens or magic shenanigans at all.

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Tbf, this was a commission and aside from this one, how many Ben 10 works has TheWriteFiction made thus far?

Edit: About the sex scenes feeling rushed; I’m pretty sure that’s the point. Ben and Gwen have just discovered what attraction to the opposite gender and the pleasures of masturbation and sex all feel like in one go. They were both virgins until this moment.

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