The Return of the King! Good to see you posting again!

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the institute needs to be burned to the ground

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Black Life Matters..Nothing else just racism pure as we can see. Everyone know that BLM its even more racism than any other. I mean wtf treat black guy bad=racism but do same to white its pefrectly normal? Its just racism.
Thats why story about black cuck with small dick its masterpiece cuz its very rare.

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votum is back！

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ohhhhhhhhh！

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Yeeees! So glad to have you back and can't wait to see where this story goes

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Hmm, Ellie stopped being a bbc slut just to suck of a bbc on her next date?

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Love the tan lines. Legend!

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wooooooooo!

wooooooooo!

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Glad you are back!

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Glad to see you back and in excellent form! Looking forward to Part II and beyond!

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OK, constructive criticism, too complex for a fap material, and too convoluted/fluff/annoying/boring for a adult comic. I mean the dialog and scenes, are incongruent, meaning that people talk but there is no substance, you need to chose, you want to do a dump NTR/BBC story full of tropes(witch is good too), or a more deep, with a bit of development of characters, and conflict between them, but here it seems you are stuck between those tow. And you don't fulfill ether FAP(image) bros, nether FAP(story) bros. Because I can be both, and the pacing for "FAP' for me, while reading is wack(I'm just flaccid). One grace is that is "The Spade Institute Ch. 8 (Part 1)" meaning, it will be a part 2, its just part one where you develop the characters more than some porn tropes, but, lets be serious, this is BBC, you cant be serious or deep in this kind or gender, in this you can go only the tropes or funny route or, postmodernism deconstruction bullshit(that is no necessarily bad, but majority bad). One interesting thing you did in this character, is the conflict "I'm jealous of my sister" witch is nice, but the execution of the tournament scene, where she fights with her sister, its just disappointing, no nice angles, anal was OKish, the sister gang bang was awful , too much dialogue from guys and the girls are mute, most of the time, only the big sister reacted "when did she change so much", you express this thought in her dialogue, 5? times, maybe. I'll be frank, I don't like this chapter. But I'll still watch what you will produce in the future, I think you have talent, just you need to balance story and utility(FAP) a bit better.

I had it both, faping to retarded story, or keeping my flaccid dick in hand while being astonished how good the story is. The best stories I read are those those that are like battle manga. act 1 conflict/story act 2 battle/sex act 3 story/character develomplen act 4 battle/sex, act 5 story act 6 sex and so on and so on. And in second act you can use all the degenerate porn trope you like.

IDK, I don't want to be negative, I'm just trying to be constructive, I can be wrong on most things. My advice, if my words hurt your ability to create, just ignore me as a negative nansy. And do wtf you want. It's just my 2 cents of retarded drunk opinions I have. I really liked your previous chapters, to be fair, I love corruption tag in general, I don't mind BBC and NTR because... I'm like randy in that episode of South Park, cant go back to Play Boy.

TLDR: story mid, sex scenes mid, together bad, hope part 2 is better.

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The white man's torment only lasts a generation. It's gonna be time for hybrids and blacks to torture each other 🥰

Last edited on 04 March 2024, 13:15.

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Seeing this today made me so happy! Welcome back!!

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