This is a cute doujin, translated fairly well by snorkie. The plot (it has one) is pretty standard of the Nanohaverse. Hayate wants to take advantage of subby Fate while Nanoha is away, using a magical dildo meant to be the real thing. Nanoha catches them and Hayate gets double stuffed. It has cute moments of humor that make for a charming hentai doujin. I look forward to more from snorkie.

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To be honest, I didn't translate this doujinshi. Credit goes to whoever translated this. I found it while browsing on some forums and I thought I might as well share it here since the translated version isn't posted here.

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Even though you didn't translate it, I found this one to be very good. I loved the expression on Hayate's face when Nanoha mentioned about "punishment". Put a grin on my face. Thanks for posting it up.

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@bloodthirster charming? cute? well i guess those are some words you could describe it with anyway this was awesome hayate is always a hottie and it seems this artist doesnt always do futa doujins but when he does there really good thxs for the awesome translated upload

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I found this one to be cute and amusing. Their little suggestion at the end made me think...someone should make a fanfic based from this. I absolutely love this doujin. My second favorite next to that NineteenS NxF doujin.

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