Hey people hope y’all doing great ~
This is my first translation I've ever done after creating my new TL team.. English and Japanese are not my first languages so there are some small grammatical mistakes. Please ignore them with your big heart !!
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I opened page 4 and saw "compare to my friend's mother, she is little loose" and "she look to sexy"

"this is my first translation" ✓
very large book ✓
commissions link in uploader comment ✓
multiple errors in the first couple of pages ✓

I would expect someone may be willing to list more grammatical/spelling errors in the comments since this seems to be a relatively popular artist, but you may want to get your own proof-reader if you are planning to translate more books.

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ok i will be careful next time thank you !!

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questionnable translation aside, the dad is a absolute chad and a wingman.
not the usual pathetic "i got a micro-dick and i can't please my wife" type of cuck, he's a giga-chad who can absolutely satisfy her and has no shame about his fetish.

i hope haitoku won't ruin it the same way he ruined previous works.

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Wincest for the whole family. I hope the mom gets preggo and we get a sweet home Alabama end.

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Man,I miss Ano! Okaa-san no Shousai. :/
I know Haitoku always dabbled in NTR(to the point it blew up in his face in the Dono mama ga Suki series)but I always found him to have a stronger grasp on vanilla alabama with some comedy thrown in.
Since this already starts out with a NTR premise I wouldnt hold my breath for this staying...well the way it is but hey,hope the best for you guys.

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Dad is pretty persuasive.

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Oh yeah I can't wait to commission someone who has the English spelling ability of a toddler and can't speak Japanese to translate something... from Japanese to English.

rough grammar

p.3 waited~? > what
p.3 u
p.3 kawaiii > not english
p.4 smile often > she smiles
p.4 compare to
p.4 she look
p.8 i was thinking to borrow
p.8 sorry for it
p.8 i guess it's around when
p.9 i like to do it > i'd
p.9 is masterpiece
p.9 as hot blooded young like you > a
p.10 that no one else can match it
p.10 hobby > fetish
p.11 about having my beloved wife cuckolded > she wouldn't be cuckolded. he would.
p.11 having a hard time to making it
p.11 "cuckolding my wife" > again, she wouldn't be. he would.
p.12 to me have sex
p.13 an good looking
p.13 fkd
p.14 like crazy monkey
p.14 plezzz

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Oh ya i started translating this one sometime back and never finished or released it, it was funny though how freaky the dad is lol

just gift wrapped the mom for him lol

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>ok i will be careful next time thank you !!
maybe fix this one before you attempt to do another one, just a thought

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Wow.. Different kind of NTR story.. Nice..

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every boy needs a wingman dad :)

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what a weirdass plot, why not just make the mom a widow or divorced from the getgo lol

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Lmfao a dad that wants to be cucked, and by his son nonetheless. Oh haitoku why are you so godlike xD
You certainly don't see this kinda plot often, I like. Though I think I'll wait for a better TL before going through the whole book cause I honestly can't tell if this is MTL or not...

I just hope Haitoku doesn't decide to play with fire again and throw another NTR curveball like he did before...

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why do retarded ESLs always pick the best doujins to translate

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because they can actually speak more than 1 language, unlike retarded EOLs (english only langauge)

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