Hello, this is Fuantei's Idola
Please let me know any mistakes or questions or etc., thank you.

Kokoro refers to herself with both 我々(wareware, plural) and 私 (watashi, singular) in this work

JP Version: https://e-hentai.org/g/971372/f6107046d0/

Shouldn't it be:
Page 11:
Koishi: Is it alright? Am I going to get killed or something?

Page 23:
Kokoro: If she had remembered me, then normally wouldn't she have come and greeted me?
She didn't notice me? But that can't...
She doesn't remember?

Page 24:
She doesn't...
...remember...
She doesn't remember at all!

?

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oops, you're right
for page 11 I goofed
for pages 23/24 I psyched myself out thinking it was related to Koishi's Hopeless Masquerade ending and I confirmation bias'd my way to misreading it entirely
Sorry, I try to proofread these but sometimes I don't realize when I've already made mistakes
Thank you for letting me know, I'll be more careful next time

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Yeah, no big deal, glad to be of help.

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i often feel bad for koishi-chan

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