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I'm so sorry for the pun on page 10. If it makes you feel any better, my first attempt was something about making "penile tea" by steeping his dick in her pussy juice or something, so really you should be thanking me for sparing your eyes from that abomination (except of course right now. Sorry...)

As far as I can tell, the original Japanese line was some kind of untranslatable pun relying on the fact that "Batsu" can mean both "penalty" (hence, penalty games, where if you lose/get the wrong answer, you have to suffer a punishment) and the symbol "×", used to indicate an incorrect answer. So the line is something like:

"It's called a penalty (batsu) game because you and I intersect (the Japanese word used here can mean both to cross over or to have sex) like the "x" (batsu) character (literally made of two intersecting lines)."

This is also the reason her pussy is censored with an "x" on that panel and that panel only.

Anyway, if you notice any mistakes/typos/better puns, please type them in the comments and I'll fix them ASAP.

You're forgiven.

I think the pun is some reference to the fact their genitals are crossing each other...you know, like an x.

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Yes, I think that's how the term (交わる) acquired its sexual meaning, but the part I was trying to explain is how that relates to a "penalty". It's because the character used here for "penalty" (x) involves two lines crossing over (like their genitals).

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That is some fantastic localization, well done

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When the wrong(?) version of Meta-Nav is installed on your phone.

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F:Mind Control and Femdom are a rare but welcome combination of tags

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Let's be frank, the localized pun only works because it is said by a gyaru - known for talking in modern slangs so alien to the rest of the population, especially to boomers. Even if you find it kinda cringe, yes, that's the point. Gyarus are shamelessly cringe, that's their charm.

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did the gyaru trend expand or is she just exceptionaly light on spraytan and stupid sparkle bling?

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@PipedPiper Gyaru has always been a pretty broad descriptor for girls with a lot of subgenres and shiro gyaru is almost as popular as kuro gyaru.

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